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A类雅思大作文7分范文及解析:父母双方应该参加育儿课程

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以下为雅思备考考生分享A类雅思大作文7分范文及解析:父母双方应该参加育儿课程,此类话题是雅思考试中常考的,希望各位雅思考生能够认真对待,好好阅读!下面我们就详细的了解一下吧!

以下为雅思备考考生分享A类雅思大作文7分范文及解析:父母双方应该参加育儿课程,此类话题是雅思考试中常考的,希望各位雅思考生能够认真对待,好好阅读!下面我们就详细的了解一下吧!

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观点类大作文,社会类话题

Taking care of children is important, so both mothers and fathers should take childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree

题目来源:2013119日大陆雅思大作文

题目大意

照顾好孩子非常重要,因此父母双方应该参加育儿课程,问:你是否同意?

关键词

️ Both:题干说到父母双方都要接受育儿培训,考虑到很多父母都在职,去参加培训的确是有难度的,而且是双方都要所以可以选择否定双方。

但是笔者在这篇文章选择写同意,重点落在家庭环境和父母行为对孩子的影响,这样的话父母双方都参加培训也是有必要的。 

写作思路解析

规划写作任务,论证过程分两个方面:

1.育儿教育的重要性.

1)家长给孩子的提供的不单单是关心和照顾。

2)家长还需要对孩子有清晰的认识,以及如何帮助培养他们的能力。

2. 育儿教育的重要性

1 孩子双商的形成在上学前就已经形成。

2)家长的行为和家庭的环境对孩子的感官,双商,解决问题的能力有很大的影响。

提纲梳理

雅思写作

高分写作示范

Both positive and negative effects of childcare have proven to be long lasting.  Thereforethere has been a surge of interest in arranging childcare courses for parents. Although it seems to be overreaching to require both parents participation in professionally organized childcare training, personally, I believe that both parents’ participation is advisable for the sake of providing growth-oriented environment for children.

The notion that the role of parents is to provide a safe place for children to relax, cater for childs emotional and physical needs, and provide consistent and responsive care is narrow and superficial.  Insteada lot more are expected from the role of parents and the parenting children received.  First of all, taking training course allows parents have a clear perspective of what to expect from the child developmentally and are able to nurture his growing skills accordingly.

Simultaneously, researches prove that children’s foundational understanding of intelligence and emotion is formed before they even start explicitly learning a curriculum.  It is the environment created by the parents that could stunt or facilitate a child’s sensory, motor, emotional, and linguistic development.  This is not only because children are prone to model everything a parent does and incorporate what they see into their own lives.  Also, the home education system adopted by the parents and the level of support given to their children will directly affect their children’s intelligence development and problem-solving ability.  Therefore, it is crucial for parents to take advice and training on how to behave themselves in front of their children and how to guarantee formal, structured environment for children to stretch and grow. 

In conclusion, parents have much of a role to play in the growth of the next generation in more aspects than is generally believed.  Those traditional ways of childcare is no longer sufficient. 

相关词汇和语法结构

overreaching

growth-oriented environment

superficial

emotional and physical needs

consistent

responsive

structured

Simultaneously

have a clear perspective of

explicitly

stunt

sensory

incorporate

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